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I LOVE drawing this character! :iconsimsimia: commissioned this of her character, who I have drawn for her before years ago.

I'm still taking commissions but I'm a mess and have a bunch of queues I have to find and clear. Check [link] this journal if interested.
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*JeniferHarris Nov 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Ooh I think I like the eyes the most, they're so pretty.

I think there is too much hard shading on the cup, it looks like she's holding it straight but the bottom is shaded like it's folding under itself. I would also recommend toning the texture on the hat down a bit because it's a little too prominent, making it feel flat.

I mean other than some shading advice I don't have much to say, it just feels very medium toned and could use some more darks and lights.
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=lucid Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Useful critique. I'm trying to work on my shading. D: Thanks a lot!
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*JeniferHarris Nov 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yeah it can be tough knowing if you should enhance something or not, that's why in your earlier works I recommended making a new layer above all of your other layers and coloring it in black, then changing it to a "color" layer and you can see your image in black and white to see how the shading looks.

But I just realized I have no idea if you use photoshop.
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=lucid Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Gurl I use nothing BUT Photoshop.
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*JeniferHarris Nov 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Aaaaw yeah!
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=little-owlette Nov 5, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Aww, so cute! <3 I love bunnies. Those big floppy ears!
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